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For All Lost Love

Poem By: Keepers River
Romance


I was writing a poem about dark rain and light rain loving each other and all that when it just went poof! and vanished. so I'm writing this one, hope you like ducklings! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 22    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Lost, lost, lost.

A memory of a dream when dark and light met.

Lost.

slipped away,

down the drain,

 Love sucked up and unmercifully swallowed.

-

Gone, gone, gone.

When Hope was teased out

Then crushed without a care.

Gone.

-

Something Time will weep over for all eternity.

Becomeing nothing but a tale for children deep in winter's cluches.

Something that was forbidden but wonderful,

a dream shared by two,

never to come again.

A chance at something so pure

that the sight of it made angels weep forlorn tears of joy and hope and pain and sorrow,

because the angels knew, deep down, that such a love

never had a glimmer of a chance.

-

Weep mortal, weep,

for all lost love.


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Comments:

'that the sight of it made angels weep forlorn tears of joy and hope and pain and sorrow'
That was my favorite line. This was really good! =) Mandy

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Dearest Mandy, the angels wouldn't be weeping if they had CHOCOLATE! (But thanks anyway Mandy love!)
With MUCH MORE WONDERFUL CHOCOLATE!!!!!!,
KR

So sad! It makes me think of Lancelot and gwenevier with their forbidden love, told as tales to children, but essentially a trajedy of love. I'm sad now :(

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

ohhh, don't be sad..... XP CHOCOLATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
With MORE WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL CHOCOLATE!!!!!!!!,
KR



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