Random First Lines: Friendship is forever It’s a bond that never diesSomething that not even a hundred million years could... : Poetry » Read
Welcome Visitor: 
sigh . . . View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 14, 2008 Reads: 15 Comments: 6 Likes: 1
come to me
let me hold you
grasp me tightly
and never let go.
I know your grip will loosen
and you will run from me
but I have this moment
before you desert me.
I've never asked these questions
I've never wanted more
embracing you seems to assuage me
and calm my worried mind.
you break away
you leave me standing
your life continues
while mine is stuck still in your arms.
Email this story |
Print Story |
Add to reading list
Nice poem LA. The line that stuck in my head was I know your grip will loosen and you will run from me
keep up the good work!
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
Nice poem LA. The line that stuck in my head was I know your grip will loosen and you will run from me
keep up the good work!
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
Nice poem LA. The line that stuck in my head was I know your grip will loosen and you will run from me
keep up the good work!
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
hi! lacey. seems like life seems to've come to a standstill for u. u r living for a moment of hug alone and u r ready for a desertion too. SAD! is there some way u could carry on. this is too sad after ur other poems. what happened! lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
i love the metaphor, great parallel:)
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Thanks for publishing this work.
Are you really as young as you listed in your bio?
These thoughts seem to come from someone a bit more wise than the typical teen on Gossip Girl or The Hills.
I'm really glad too because the world needs more people who can feel.
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
© Copyright 2008 L A Gardner All rights reserved. L A Gardner has granted theNextBigWriter, LLC non-exclusive rights to display this work on Booksie.com.
