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Spellbound

Poem By: LeAnne
Romance


boy meets girl, girl falls in love with boy, boy turns out to be.....a magician! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 25, 2008    Reads: 75    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


Spellbound

You stand there in the audience,

His black and red suit matched him perfectly.

His overwhelming magic made everyone silent.

You stood spellbound, staring at him intently

So as to not fall into your confusion toward him.

 

When everyone laugh,

You laugh.

When everyone claps,

You clap along.

 

You take note of him as he performs.

His hair is golden like the sun,

His eyes are precious sapphire gems,

And his face was tenderly handsome.

 

When everyone laugh,

You stayed quiet.

When everyone claps,

You didn’t move.

 

You stand there thinking,

Wondering what had happened to you.

Why were you sinking

Into his magic through and through.

 

When his show is done,

You stay there, standing.

He finishes packing and decides to leave at dawn,

But he sees you wandering.

 

He offers his place for you to stay,

You stare at him with high wonders from above,

He kisses you good-nigh that day,

And you knew and he knew that you both have found your true love...

 

 


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Comments:

it's so sweeeet.. and cute! i love it =) (just remember to check some spelling errors)

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah i know. i do that sometimes! lolz!

oh, it is such a sweet poem. ireally like it:]

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!!
i very much appreciate your comment!!

awww, what an adorably sweet poem! I'm eager to check out the rest of your stuff! Well done!
Steph(:

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!!
And i must make time to read yours also!!

This is beautifully written, quite magical and gentle and special. I like it a lot.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you like it!
And thank you so much for the wonderful comments!

I liked this, very sweet and romantic.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again!!
Actually, thanks a bunch, i'm glad you enjoyed it!

Awwwwwww,this is sooo touchy,and beautifulll.I really love it.I almost started to cry.Its full of emotions.Its great great!!:)Really brillyant!:)

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a bunch!! 1
I enjoy having comments from you

amazing, i love how you made it so she was 'spellbound' by his beuty!!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

And magic!!
And thank you so much!



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