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Burning in Fury

Poem By: LifexSucksxLovexSucks
Romance


i got inspiration camping on the east coast. i was sitting in front of the fire, missing my friends. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 30    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


A roaring fire
A burning flame
An old guitar
And we feel the same
 
A love so true
Noting gets through
Forever and always
Burning in fury
 
I promise to feel, always the same
And even when, it starts to rain
This fire for you will always burn true
And by your side, I always will be
 
And as the rain falls
The fire dims down
Just staying alive
Never to drown
 
Flaring again
It always will be
Burning for you
Inside of me
 
I promise to feel, always the same
And even when, it starts to rain
This fire for you will always burn true
And by your side, I always will be
 
The air we breathe
My guitar as fuel
Our love as heat
My flame will be true


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I love the loose feeling rhymes and flow. Another brilliant piece.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much. :)

Wow... I'm at a loss for words.

I've been reading your poems today and I am totally inspired. You are a great writer. I love the way you express your feelings in writing. Everything flows and ties together in a perfect way.

This is brilliant, as I've said. It's really something that a lot of people can relate to. It says that the poem was about your friends, but I get the feeling from your writing that it's more than that. Love. But not so much in the friendship sense. Maybe that is just me. I see it as either a poem about your friends, or a real commitment to someone special. Am I wrong?

I'm going to read the rest of your poems. They're wonderful. Keep it up.

xRAINBOWx

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much for the comment :)
no, you're right about it being about someone special.
unfortunately, i'm very unlucky and it didn't work out.
haha, why did you think i picked "life sucks, love sucks" for my name XD

thanks again though. :)

Ashley house
(not registered user)

wow rob thats a great piece
it makes me think of how much like u mean to me
i dont know how to explain it but wow !!!

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanks :P



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