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i got inspiration camping on the east coast. i was sitting in front of the fire, missing my friends. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 Reads: 30 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
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I love the loose feeling rhymes and flow. Another brilliant piece.
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
Wow... I'm at a loss for words.
I've been reading your poems today and I am totally inspired. You are a great writer. I love the way you express your feelings in writing. Everything flows and ties together in a perfect way.
This is brilliant, as I've said. It's really something that a lot of people can relate to. It says that the poem was about your friends, but I get the feeling from your writing that it's more than that. Love. But not so much in the friendship sense. Maybe that is just me. I see it as either a poem about your friends, or a real commitment to someone special. Am I wrong?
I'm going to read the rest of your poems. They're wonderful. Keep it up.
xRAINBOWx
Posted: Sep 14, 2008
wow rob thats a great piece
it makes me think of how much like u mean to me
i dont know how to explain it but wow !!!
Posted: Nov 6, 2008
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