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I Just Wanna Hold You

Poem By: LifexSucksxLovexSucks
Romance


haha, basically what i'm looking for in a relationship. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I don’t need to kiss you
I just want to hold you
 
I want to show you, how I feel
With nothing to stop, you doing the same
I just want hold you
 
Your feelings for me, I’m not really sure
But please let me show you, I can be pure
I don’t need to be, a real “boyfriend”
Cause I just want to hold you
 
When two people meet, the way that we did
Their lives are forever, completely intertwined
 
And now I’ve come, to love you
And I hope you feel the same
But it won’t be forever
So just let me hold you
 
Just let me show you
How I feel
Without being awkward

So just let me hold you


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Comments:

it's nice, rob. :) good job. I have 7 more poems to read now. >.<
haha. You were busy while on the East Coast.

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanks. :)

Kathy
(not registered user)

Aww ~~ so sweet!

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. :)



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