Implying the Beginning

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Poem By: LifexSucksxLovexSucks
Romance

Tags: love, starting, ending, beginning, light, life

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Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 Reads: 31 Comments: 2 Likes: 0

You know I feel you

And you feel me too

Even though we know

We’ll never touch

We’re just so similar

That we couldn’t work

We read each other’s thoughts

But we seem to have forgot

In our haste for love

We’ve been shown a taste of lust

The stinging taste

We are a waste

Forever stuck

In this limbo of love

Never will we know

How great we could become

I gave you my heart

And yours became stone

When all I asked

Was one single chance

In our haste for love

We’ve been shown a taste of lust

The stinging taste

We are a waste

So now here we are

Going no-where fast

Leaving us behind

In the cruel, painful past

But still this light

We hold in our hearts

Surfaces often

And implies a new start

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Comments:

Itsuwari

Wow, I love it. Excellently written, the form, the word choice, it all flows very well. Incredible job.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much. :)
i hope to hear more from you.

I love the ending. You fit it in great, it all worked out really well. :)
and just so you know, there isn't a poem you write I can't see through. No matter what it's about.
Just letting you know ;)

good job rob!!

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, i worked on this one for at least an hour.
which is new for me, it usually takes, like 20 minutes.

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