Shoulda

Random First Lines: Run down into the cellar and bring up the last jar of pickles;They are not tempted!Plead with them, ask them... : Poetry » Read

Poem By: LifexSucksxLovexSucks
Romance

Tags: love, hate, romance, dead, killed, life, death, pain, loss, caring

Will hopefully get a band and get recording this. I already got it planned out as a song. :)

as usual, straight from my experiences. View table of contents...

Submitted: Sep 15, 2008 Reads: 37 Comments: 3 Likes: 1

Floating in my head

Are all of these words

Choice words

That I shouldn’t have said

But honestly

I really don’t care

About you

Well maybe

You shoulda let go, you shoulda let me down

You shoulda gone away, and just let me drown

You shoulda thrown me out, when you had the chance

But you kept it up, and killed this romance

I swore I’d love you

Till I die

That promise won’t be broken

Even after goodbye

You shoulda let go, you shoulda let me down

You shoulda gone away, and just let me drown

You shoulda thrown me out, when you had the chance

But you kept it up, and killed this romance

Now I feel nothing

I’m empty inside

I hope you’re happy

Without you in my life

You shoulda let go, you shoulda let me down

You shoulda gone away, and just let me drown

You shoulda thrown me out, when you had the chance

But you kept it up, and killed this romance

Email this story | Print Story | Add to reading list

Comments:

XxPrincessxX

Nice Rob. Nice.

one alteration I'd make though: The second last stanza, last line. It would read better as "Without me in your life" instead of "Without you in my life". That or change the previous line to a first person narrative. I'd just to make the lines flow better, since they seem like they should be about the same side of the story.

( Whoops. And there I go violating the "No talkie" rule. :| )

Posted: Sep 16, 2008