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one last attempt

Poetry By: lizzie wonder
Romance



BREAK FREE


Submitted:Feb 21, 2013    Reads: 19    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Feel the chain around you

the butterflies are battling

my chest feels like a balloon

you can hear the bomb ticking

you cant take it anymore

youve memorised all the doors

and all the cracks and all the windows

but theres no tools on this floor

so you use your strength to beat the door

you punch and kick and scream out loud

and the tears fall as you sink down

and on one last weak attempt

you turn the doorknob to the left

you hear the click and suddenly

you know that you where always free

IM NOT COMPLETLEY DONE YET PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND I DO HOPE TO FINISH IT AND POST THE REST SOON, I HOPE YOU LIKED IT THANKS FOR READING :)





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