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Only a boy...

Poem By: LoveCicely
Romance


It was only a boy I feel in love with. It took only a boy to change my opinion of life. Only a boy...he did so much.

This is completely fiction, but still...I connect to it in many ways. No, I have never been in love. So for the moment, this is my perception of love.
Love,
Cicely
age 14
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Submitted: May 27, 2008    Reads: 102    Comments: 10    Likes: 6   


Your name was Robbie. You were only a boy…innocent, playful. Only a boy… but still as I sat beside you in the small wooden canoe I felt light, airless, like nothing could ever go wrong. The world was mine for the taking.

Effortlessly we glided over the water, eyes locked in a never-ending embrace. Afraid if we looked away we would wake-up from this perfect fantasy we were living. Afraid to wake-up, we took no chances.

Your green eyes sparkled from the perfect sun. My brown eyes danced with the light breezy wind. It seemed we were meant to be.

You looked even more beautiful than the golden setting sun, the white water lilies and proud handsome swan. You looked more beautiful than life itself, still you were only a boy…

We paddled away from all the lies, all the truths, fantasies, their disguise. With each other we would never need more. You were my love, my reason for life, what life had become. You made me see the real reason for life, while you were only a boy…

Think of what the future still has in store, when you are no longer only a boy.

Love, Cicely


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Comments:

It is a great one.
:)

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha, well yes. I WISH he was real. But he is not.

interesting way to construct this 'poem'. Though it is not the conventional perseption of a poem, it is still very poetic which i supposed would be the reason it is categorized in the poem section. aha. thank you captain obvious. but on to further and better remarks, [i warned you about my scrambled thoughts earlier] you did a splendid job and I can't wait to read more from you [:

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah, I originally put it as short story...but that didn't seem right, so I just stuck with what I know. Poetry. haha

LoveCicely:

Well written and nicely expressed emotions of newfound love while in transition from childhood into adolescence. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Please read my newest posting, in almost a year, entitled: "Excitement Inspired In His/Her Time".

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I will be sure to do that.

I thought this was wonderful and got a little chill from it. I'm so glad I stopped by to read this. :)

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you did too, even gladder you enjoyed it!

Very nice like all the big words you use makes me happy lol well written and i agree with cris its a different way to write a poem but it works

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha. Thanks.

so sweet, tender and fresh

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

This is one of my favs! Thanks for the comment

. . . And then to learn that he is always the boy. Your greenness is beautiful. Bask in the sunset of your youth. :)

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, is that a compliment? I enjoy being "green." I hope to never become to experienced, I like my youth.

Yes, dear Cicely, I mean it as a compliment.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, thank you. I would not have even known the meaning of the word without my horse experience.

hi! cicely. if he could do so much for u personally, then he is not "only a boy". he is "the only one".

loved it. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

=)

Emma
(not registered user)

I wish I had a man like this!

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, well he is actually not real...I made him up. So, yeah, me too. =D



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