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Together in the Dark

Poem By: mestelle819
Romance


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Submitted: Apr 30, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


The world is dying slowly...

We are oblivious to the crisis at hand

I don't want to walk the world lonely

I need you to walk with me until the end

As we share our lives together

The path that lies ahead is so very dark

We can follow the light that flows from out hearts

As we share our lives together, alone in the dark


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Comments:

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I wrote a quite similar poem to this about a month ago called 'Our Forbidden Utopia' - you should check it out.

One's apocalypse is another's genesis - is what I say in response to this. Brilliantly written.

Keep up the good work!

Olola.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008



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