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He was my Love

Poem By: MissRachyVengeance
Romance


Tags: romance

A short love poem, simple. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 11, 2008    Reads: 324    Comments: 10    Likes: 2   


 

 

His scent smelling so sweet

With flawless skin that can never be beat.

He was my love, my breath of fresh air.

 

Full of desire I follow to meet his kiss

The erotic feeling I cannot miss

He was my love, my breath of pure air.

 

By the eclispe of my heart, I laugh at his jokes,

His velvet tone of which he always spoke.

He way my love, my breath of sweet air.

 

His eyes glistened with passionate fire

At which my site could never attire

He was my love, my breath of needing air.

 

He was as bright as a burning star,

At which he always seem so far.

He was my eternal love, always my breath of fresh air.

 

But now he was only a memory....


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Comments:

?Vince? wtfpwnd. Have you played his solo game yet I heard they were releasing one but never actually found out if they did or how good it was? Nice poem btw :p

Posted: Feb 12, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah i played his game, its pretty good and is a lot about his (obviously) lol. You should check it out. its called final fantasy: dirge of Cerberus

good. i liked it.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Oh, I loved it. It was beatufuly written and flowed very nicely. You did an amazing job. I'm a HUGE Stephenie Meyer fan, so I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff. :)

Posted: Mar 12, 2008

omg it's beau-tee-full!

Posted: May 18, 2008

i like it alot keep up the good work

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

amazing. I liked it. keep doing this good work

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

I liked it a lot!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

I liked your poem alot.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you =]

awesome!

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

It was more than just beautiful.
it was a poem that i would buy just to be able to say that i own it in a sense.
Sidhe

Posted: Oct 26, 2008



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