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Always Remember This: I Believe in You

Poem By: mystory
Romance


Just a poem I wrote a while ago. Like, a few months ago I think. Hope everyone likes it. :D View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 13, 2008    Reads: 153    Comments: 14    Likes: 7   


I hardly know anything about your past,

But still I can feel your pain.

I know that something must have happened,

That made you feel ashamed.

I don't know what it is,

Or anything at all.

But one thing I know for certain,

Is that I can help you stand tall.

I know almost every pain you can think of,

So I could help you heal.

I've felt so many things,

That I have hardly anything left to feel.

I've felt so many things now,

Betrayal, hurt, sadness and pain.

And also I have felt,

Loneliness, numbness, fear and shame.

I don't know which of these is on your mind,

But whatever it is I want to take it all away.

I will endure the pain for you,

So you will not be led astray.

I know you will make it.

I know you can pull through.

I know that you are strong.

I believe in you.

No matter what happens,

No matter what you've done,

I know you can find the way.

You'll know when you have won.

Even though you might think,

What you've done is wrong,

I know in my heart,

That you were good all along.

So even though you might think,

That there is nothing you can do,

And even though you think you're a failure,

I believe in you.

You have so many talents,

You have so much to live for.

Who cares what others think of you.

Who cares what happened before.

Because none of them know,

Who you really are.

Not even I know that for sure,

Even though I have searched near and far.

The only one who can really know,

Is someone very specail to me,

That person is you,

And you're the same as me.

I know I can help you,

Because we are the same.

I know that we can make it together,

And take away the blame.

Why does everyone love to cause us pain?

We are already broken without thier name calling.

What have we done to deserve this?

It feels like I am falling.

I need someone to catch me,

Before I hit the ground.

And I know who it will be,

Without even hearing a sound.

Even if you doubt youself,

And think what everyone tells you is true,

Just always remember this:

I believe in you. 


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Comments:

Cool Poem. I like it, flowed well.:)

Posted: Apr 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. :)

Beautiful. :) I really like it, it displays emotion perfectly, and I loved the rhyming throughout. I think that helps the poem flow. Well done. ^_^'

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment. :D

Has a lot of faith to it

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. :)

again long, v. much like the last one i just read, but i really like it, again full of emotion, a few spelling mistakes(hey i make loads) probably just typing errors. is the same person who u believe in here the same person u love in the last poem i just read? your poetry does intrigue me, probably because several of them seem to be about the same subjects..love, loss, betrayal, past ect...but keep on writing, i think u have a great talent!!

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! :D Yep, I love writing long stuff. Sorry about that, though. I know how annoying it is sometimes to have to read something if it's really long. Yeah, I tend to makes lots of typing errors. Haha. Well, it sort of is. Thanks for the comment.

Aw, I like it. Very sweet, and it flowed nicely.
Very nice Carly.

:)

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, so much. :D

Expresses empathy and compassion. The sort of friend the world needs. Well done.

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. :D

Very nice. It is something that everyone feels for someone, even though a lot of people around them would never know it.

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Yes, you've got it. :D It seems like there is always someone who believes in everyone, even if they don't know it.

I like it. It sounds like a good poem to give to someone who you know is sad when you don't know what to do for them. Has a lot of good advice in it, too.

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! ^^

I loved it...Five stars!!

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! :D

i love it. especially the last line.
lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, thanks! :)

Absolutely amazing. I can relate to this perfectly. =)

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, really glad you liked it. :)

Trustme
(not registered user)

You are great!

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!

You have a great talent. Keep up the good work. I loved the flow in this poem.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! ^^

your very good. loved everything; the flow, emotions, everything! keep it up =]

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. ;D



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