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The Memories

Poem By: mystory
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Submitted: Jun 18, 2008    Reads: 168    Comments: 11    Likes: 7   


As I lay in silence,

Knowing the end is near.

I look through some old photos,

Things I hold so dear.

Phographs of you and me,

Together so long ago.

Back before the great devide,

Before we let our true feelings show.

Sometimes I wish,

You would have never told me.

So maybe we could still be friends,

Like I always thought we be.

Now the memories,

Are all I have left of you.

Constantly trying to relive,

What will never again come true.

We had once been so close,

Andyou were my best friend.

Even though I'd wanted just a little more,

I thought I'd be happy till the end.

Seeing these old photographs,

Makes me wonder whythings had to be this way.

Why can't we just start over agian,

And make everything okay?

My memory of you is all I have left,

Of the time I almost knew,

What happiness was once again.

But those times are through.

Ever since you left,

I've felt nothing but pain.

My heart constantly throbing,

Hoping to see you again.

I dream of you every night,

And ofwhat we used to be.

And what could still come true,

If only you still cared about me.

Every night I see you,

Imangining what could have been.

But all this darkness,

Just couldn't be foreseen.

So now that promise,

I made to you so long ago,

Will be broken shortly,

Though you will never know.

Not until it's too late,

For you to change my mind.

Because promises that will always be kept,

Are not so easy to find.

And so when I don't respond,

Or it seems like I'm trying to hurt you,

It's not because I don't love you anymore,

It's because that promise is through.

My memories are the only thigns,

That can keep you near to my heart.

Memories are all I have left,

Even since the start.

I wish that I knew,

What you want me to do.

Do you still want me around,

Or do you want me to stay away from you?

I'd do anything for you,

So if you asked me to leave,

I'd go without argument,

This you must believe.

I'd do anything to make you happy,

Even if it caused me pain.

I'd stay up all night,

Or stand out in the pouring rain.

You can trust me,

That I hope you know.

I'll leave you alone if that's what you want,

Even thought it's hard to let go.

Because I'll still have my memories,

Of both you and I.

So even though I someday will,

These memories will never die.


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Comments:

Hey mystory. :)

Very sad poem you have here. Even though it is sad, it is extremely well written. Great poem!

Regan

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much. Glad you liked it! ^^

So sad. =[ I know how you must have been feeling when you wrote this. I'm feeling like this right now. =/ I loved it though ^^

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it's really hard. Thanks so much for the comment. ^^

hi! ms. u've made a lasting statement - mortals'll remain mortals but memories r eternal. sad but memorable. good work. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, thank you so much. =]

this made me cry-I am so not joking...but this was really touching, and I loved the Celtic music you chose....as I was reading your heartfelt words, I listened to the song and it is truly the best thing so far on booksie, just all of it, though it's very sad...really, really great job.....

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, thank's so much. The song is 'Memories' by Within Temptaion, just in case you wanted to know. Glad you liked it. ^^

chia pet
(not registered user)

great job Great poem!

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. =D

Trustme
(not registered user)

I wish that I knew,
What you want me to do.

Just go and be with your loving friend..., that's all we need to do if we want to understand the mystery of feelings and take responsibility of our actions. Well!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Um...thanks. Glad you liked it. =D

I know what your saying. My ex told me he loved me and would always then the other day he told me that he was lieing that he din't loveme that he was just being sarcastic.... Anyway. What is the name of that song?

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww, I'm sorry. =[ The name of the song is Memories, by Within Temptation. Thanks for reading. =D

awwww, what a lovely poem! you're really talented. well done lovely!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Gee, thanks. ^-^

ah, very beautiful and sad. So full of tears and longing. Very beautifully put!!

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so very much! =D

Wow, thats all i have to say...wow.


This poem is EXACTLY what has happened to me. exactlyy.

you just took the words outta my mouth and wrote them on paper. i swear i was almost crying, reading this.


you are an amazing poet :D

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow, really? I'm really glad you liked it. Oh, and thanks for becoming a fan. ^^

a sad poem...but very touching and i loved it!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much. ^-^



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