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You are my pain...

Poem By: Myurian Girl
Romance

Tags: pain, love, everything

My pain is you... View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 24, 2009 Reads: 141 Comments: 4 Likes: 3

My Pain

You are my love

And so many things

You're just so undescribable

Like a free hawk with a strong will

You're my everything though

You're my devotion

And the thing that spins my head

Until my neck will ache

I've given up on trying to forget you

Just because we're impossible

But it will just be more painful

You are my pain

My greatest agony

But my strongest love

I pray that one day

You'll actually notice me

The way I notice you

When I realize you don't

A dagger pierces my heart

So deep you shove it into my soul

When I see my blood I smile though

Because although you're my pain

You're my love and inspiration

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Comments:

EdwardJBradleySr

Myurian Girl:

Most heartfelt, well expressed and written.

Gave it an "I Like It".
One of the better ones I have read. Like my own posting entitled, "Katie Anne".

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Feb 24, 2009

Author Comment:

Thanks. :D I'll be sure to read that. Sounds interesting. ;)

Tigerchill

full of emotion! a very good love poem Myurian Girl. take care, Tiger.

Posted: Feb 25, 2009

this is a Masterpiece!!!you know how to manage this hard to express emotions but the best of all is these lines:

A dagger pierces my heart

So deep you shove it into my soul

When I see my blood I smile though

Because although you're my pain

You're my love and inspiration

OMG THIS says so much!!! i luv it ^_^

and clicks the i like it big botton ^_^

Posted: Feb 26, 2009

Author Comment:

Thanks so much :))