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...Says My Heart

Poem By: Natane Alagua
Romance


This poem is about a woman who has moved on since the break-up of her asshole of a ex-husband. She has gotten remarried but now her ex is trying to come crawling back. This poem speaks to women who have been hurt by a man and shows them that they can move on and break through anything that some man has put in their way to try to stop them from where they are trying to go in there life. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Nov 9, 2007    Reads: 35    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Take a walk with me down memory lane

I want you to see all of my heart wrenching pain

I want you to feel what i felt inside

when i loved you so much, but your love for me you denied

You fool, for treating me like a play toy

I wanted a man but you! You're just a fuckin little boy

You dummy, You fake, You fraudl You Trick

You..........

I laugh at myself when i see how much of myself

that i put into you

I tried to be a good woman i tried to do what you wanted

me to

But its over, and now you come crawling back home

but guess what, your spot here with me is long gone

I have a real man now who will love me and care

He treats me like a woman, does things you wouldn't dare

Why are you here, what have you come for

I have no time for you, I'll show you the door

My life kept on going even when you dropped out

What did you think i would do, Sit here and pout?

Now if you wouldn't mind please leave, i have a date just my husband and me

 

 

 


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Comments:

MistyBurn
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HEy, its great, keep up the good work

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate that you took the time and read and commented on my work. I will write more!!

Chocolate Thunder
(not registered user)

Awsome Poem, you should write more because they are really great

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it and I will write more

Writingwithapurpose
(not registered user)

Great!!!!!!!!

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, i really appreciate your comments

JIR
(not registered user)

Awsome Poem, it rocks!!

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, I really appreciate your comment

Really Great Take Care Juliett

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it but im not understanding why you called me Juliett...!!!



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