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In The Shadows It Grew

Poem By: nikkiluv123
Romance


a girl in forbidden love,
but caught and so forced to marry without love View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 82    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


In the shadows it grew,

our love for each other,

forbidden as always with me.

It came too strong,

i knew no other song,

so i stepped in the light to see.

Saw my whole life,

the way it was then,

rebelious and intense.

Saw just him,

my new world and dreams,

but i couldnt let go of him yet..

So i stayed in the shadows,

a new life to me,

the best and worst thing i ever did.

The life was thrilling,

a life worth living,

those few weeks,

of him and what we did.

But then we got caught,

our faces distrought,

but smiling and laughing inside.

But the others were mad,

and thought we were sad,

and standing up tall with their pride.

Our love was gone,

we'd lost the song,

and we could'nt explain what went wrong,

we told them we were inlove,

but back they would shove,

so we went back to where we belonged.

and life was bad,

without him i was sad,

but decided to never enter the shadows again,

i met someone new,

but no love was new,

without love it was boring and plain.

xx.

By Nicole Elizabeth Bernadette Brunt


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Comments:

a well written , thought provoking poem . to lose a genuine love and replace it with a loveless marriage must be more than a heart can bear . i dream of a love all consuming , unhindered by condition's or barriers . i do hope life finds a way to give you the same .

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Aw a really nice poem, I quite like the rhythm of it, and I also agree with the comment before me. :)

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

thankyou guys.
i really appreciate it.

Posted: Jul 25, 2008



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