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'longing'

Poem By: nikkiluv123
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this is merely my way of defining the word: 'longing' View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


so have you heard the word longing?

do you know what it means?

it means a great deal,

let me recall of what it seems.

it's quite closely impossible,

to squeeze the meaning into one word,

but it feels like your concience,

screaming out to another bird.

when the thing that you are longing for,

is just right over there,

all you want to do,

is to run, jump, and swear.

for you get a warming feeling,

that gets hot when changing mood,

but then if kept away too long,

its likely to explode.

the feeling, to be loning,

is not for the weak or strong,

for if you misunderstand it,

it will make you always wrong.

so just a word of caution,will

the one i'm longing most,

dont go too far away from me,

and last not least, dont come too close.

xx.

by nicole elizabeth bernadette brunt.


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Comments:

Nicole. I really like the way you analysed a single word rather than covering a general theme. I have read your first three, and this is my favourite.
Plus, you saved the best two lines until last, in my opinion. I rated it with a 'LIKE IT' Ricky.

Posted: Jul 17, 2008



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