by nicole elizabeth bernadette brunt.

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its just bout love,
bout love
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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008 Reads: 24 Comments: 1 Likes: 0
by nicole elizabeth bernadette brunt.
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This is probably the best poem I've read of yours. It makes the reader think, it gives the action a setting, it's got a good, happy, 'in love' flow to it... few spelling mistakes etc... but those can be ironed out easily. Very good. Well done!
The Rogue Hat Company
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
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