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The title says it all really.
I chose to use no punctuation at the beginning or end as lonliness is not a flash-in-the-pan 3 stanza thing, it's (trying not to sound cliché) an endless, tiresome thing.
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Submitted: Jun 9, 2008 Reads: 63 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
"A Soul That Sees True Beauty Walks Alone"
not for crying floods of tears,
nor having faced my greatest fears,
I'm like a vase without the flowers,
what I once was this thing devours,
leaving thorns and shardes of glass
from shattered memories of the past
that cut my flesh and line my throat,
alone at sea I lie afloat,
but barely as I'm sinking quickly,
filling up with something sickly,
drowning me, my hope supressed
and filling me with emptyness
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I like this one very much. Well constructed and deftly penned.
Posted: Jun 9, 2008
Just brillisnt and captivating!!! well done!!
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
i liked thsi alot.
the last stanza is my favorite. anywho your whole poems holds a lot of emotion(which is why i like sad poems a better than others). And on top of that i could piture it in my head..........I love doing that, it helps me,somehow, to understand stuff better. anywho this was realy good!
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
Kind of depressing, but it draws me to it. I love it! I think sad and emotional poems do that to people; keep them reading and holds their interest. Love it!
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
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