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A Wealth Of Smiles

Poem By: November
Romance


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Submitted: Apr 9, 2008    Reads: 50    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


A Wealth Of Smiles

I tell my friends my life is rich
with a new found wealth of smiles,
that if happiness was currency
I could buy the British Isles.

"But what about your broken heart?"
Like everything it mends,
her best friend turned to boyfriend,
I guess this is how it ends.

"But don't you worry, as you said,
joy, to you, is free."
"You'll be alright," that's what they say
as I smile and I agree.

The truth is that my heart went broke
one year ago tonight.
And still it's homeless, all alone, so
no, I won't be alright.


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A smile can be worth more than a million dollars.

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Truer words were never spoken.
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Irwin
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Very nicely crafted piece of work that flows well and tells the story. Like the message and the concept.

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank you very much.
x

this is really, really good, I like it sooo much! The rhyming and the rhythm is PERFECT! And I love the topic, the whole thing! I'm totally clicking on the "i like it" button, I'll click it like five time if I can!!! Really good job ^.^

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so so very much =D
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