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Can you turn back time???

Poem By: nuttyz
Romance


Tags: love, hurt, loss, alone, lost, pain

.........just wrote something about how i felt several times... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 112    Comments: 8    Likes: 3   


I wish things could be turned back,
Back to how it was before
Your voice pulled me through the darkness
Now I'm lost in the eternal buzz
of nothingness and silence

I wish I hadn't said what I said
Now the memories are stuck in my head
Tossing and turning, restlessly in my bed.
As silent tears roll down my cheek.
Why do I even care so much?

I wish you would know how I feel
You mean so much to me
I wish you'd be my knight in shining armour.
I wish you would finally be...mine
But I can't even tell you!

I wish you would need me,
Almost just like I need you.
And all I know is that...
I really do love you...


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Comments:

the title reminds me of a song by Cher...i really enjoyed reading this.

James

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you james :)

thank you :)...i hope you enjoy other poems of mine too ;)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Wow, absolutly beautiful poem. ^^

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

ahem..i ddnt know that you have to reply!!!...damn..so silly of me...lolz!!!
nd instead i posted comments!!
my bad my bad...lol!

:D thanks!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Wow, that was definatly emotional. I completly understand that poem. I was the person in that poem not 2 years ago.

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Well...yea it is emotional...glad you liked it :)

Awesome poem. :}

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

gee..Thanks a lot!:D

Wow! Very well written.
Very touching.
Relays d pain u r feeling.

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much ^_^

I love the theme, it kind of had me on my toes.

Keep up the lovely work.

Lids♄

Posted: Nov 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks a lot Lids! ^^



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