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i wrote this when i was thinking of a very special person...who says i deserve much better...i wish he knew the only thing that would be better for me is when he is with me...not without him can everythin be better...but will be hard and lonely.... View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 25, 2008 Reads: 95 Comments: 11 Likes: 6
I wish he knew how much i love him...
And how i spend hours
Thinking about him everyday...
And dreaming sweetest of sweet dreams
Of him every night...
And how my eyes are tearing for him
Every time i think of him....
Knowing that hez way too far from my reach...
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Aww, this is such a sweet poem, and I know just how that feels. Short, but beautiful in absolutly every possible way. LOVED IT!
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
Hey nuttyz :) I know how you feel. Its tough when you are in this situation, but I guess it's the perfect time to write beautiful poetry :). I really enjoyed this in its subtle brilliance. I look forward to your new stuff! Regan
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
wow i really liked this such a sweet poem...it's short but amazing/beautiful in every way!!
keep up the good work!!
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
Wistful and touching poem, Nuttyz. It's really hard to be in this kind of situation, and your feelings show through your words. It was a sad and lovely poem, and I really liked it.
Stephanee :)
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
i wish he knows too...because he is the one who can make u happy and the only one u deserve to be with...lovely poem
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
wow this is really emmiting the love you feel :]
[[is this the guy "prince charming" that you told me about?]]
its a beautiful poem, i love it =]
but you deserve to be happy you know. i hope you can find someone who really loves you back, and makes you happy... you deserve it =]
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
Beautiful
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
I LOVE this poem. Awesome job :}
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
short, and good. reminds me of my current collection up on my page. I'd advise you to check it out! It flowed brilliantly and can touch anyone's heart, because everyone's been in that situation. Good work!
Posted: Sep 13, 2008
This is so sad and sweet. your poems are very touching never stop writing such awesome poetry!
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
aw I liked this!!! ugh these situations suck don't they? lol keep up the work bc i really like it haha
Posted: Sep 30, 2008
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