umm...i just wrote this based on an idea frm a book..hope u like it :)
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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008
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Wandering all alonenowhere to go…No-one to accompanyDiscovering dead endsTurning back againFinding nothing…No shoulder to cry on…Not a soul to talk toFinally coming to a conclusion…That I might be a lost soul??But still , searchingAnd looking for someone…To take me homeOr anywhere I’d belong...
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i got first comment XDXD
glee
this is such a deep poem. it gives out the strong feeling of loneliness, but the will to find someone to be there for you, in the poem you yearn to belong.
the form and way you put the words and feelings is just brilliant :D
i love it!!
waaa
*presents shoulder*
[[if you need it XDXD]]
take caree
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
Wow. That was really good! Sad though *sniff*
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
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