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Lost soul...

Poem By: nuttyz
Romance


umm...i just wrote this based on an idea frm a book..hope u like it :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Wandering all alone
nowhere to go…
No-one to accompany
Discovering dead ends
Turning back again
Finding nothing…
No shoulder to cry on…
Not a soul to talk to
Finally coming to a conclusion…
That I might be a lost soul??
But still , searching
And looking for someone…
To take me home
Or anywhere I’d belong...


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Comments:

i got first comment XDXD
glee
this is such a deep poem. it gives out the strong feeling of loneliness, but the will to find someone to be there for you, in the poem you yearn to belong.
the form and way you put the words and feelings is just brilliant :D
i love it!!

waaa
*presents shoulder*
[[if you need it XDXD]]


take caree

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe...Thanks soo much my friend!:D

Wow. That was really good! Sad though *sniff*

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe...thanks!
Glad you liked it!:-)



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