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You were my destiny

Poem By: nuttyz
Romance


this is a poem written by a friend of mine...enjoy :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


There you stood so gleamingly,
I kept staring unbelievingly,
A beat of a unique rhythm captured my heart unknowingly,
So felt i'd written my destiny silently;

Your beauty had no words for a description,
Which i felt was so close to perfection,
Raringly my heart cries for your salvation,
Truly have i fallen in love at this momentum of innovation;

Why'd you walk away when only love filled this heart,
Why'd it pain in the heart as a piercing dart,
When you had said the hardest goodbye not long before start,
Was this the finest painting if pain was an art;

Remember what i said when you left this bargain,
Either tommorow or a day afterwards we would meet again,
Because i believe you were my destiny,
Which shall never change in eternity....


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Comments:

this is good loved it!!!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you liked it! ^_^

:O:O:O:O




*gawps*





*is left completely speechless*









*still speechless*






*still*







*still*







ok words are back XD woooooow its soooo totally.....*looks for perfect words*
awesomeley,amazingly, brilliantly, GREAT!!!

i sooooo love all the rhyming words at the end of each line its rly brilliant!!
and the words themselves are....excellent!!
waaaaaaaaaaaa love iiiittt!!!
:D:D:D::D:DD
xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe..:D:D:D:D
XD thanks a bunchy!!!!!hehe:D
^^take care!



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