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Blue and Grey

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Romance


Tags: romance, blue, grey, doors

Eyes of blue and grey. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 15, 2008    Reads: 54    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


His eyes

Such a dazzling blue

They sparkle in the light,

Opening windows of emotion

His eyes, they hide nothing,

You could see anything in them.

Behind those pools of blue

Is a crystal door

The door is beautiful

A dazzling crystal door.

Look close enough and see

Through the clear glass

To the depths of his pure soul.

Almost anyone with good intent

Can open up that crystal door,

And enter into his soul

To never leave or want again

Because his soul is pure

The purest of the pure

No hate or malice dwells

In those eyes

Of dazzling

Blue

Her eyes

Such a piercing grey

They catch every detail

They show no emotion

in the dark they sparkle

With a light only they possess,

Pools of silver in darkness

Dark steel in the light,

They hide everything

Yet let nothing in.

Behind those steely orbs

Is a locked door,

The door is strong

Made to protect her

To hide it all away

All the hurt she's ever felt

The door to her soul

Is locked with no key

No one gains entrance

Through that concrete door

There is sadness in these

Eyes of silvery

Grey

Together they will grow

He'll put up walls

She'll tear some down

All to create the

Blue and grey.


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Comments:

wow, this is simply amazing!! Such a wonderful way to describe eyes, it was beautiful!! since i love eyes, i really loved it!! such an amazing poem!!!!

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Wow.. I really liked this poem. Beautifully written! :)

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I haven't gotten much of a response so I was slightly worried about it. I guess not anymore.
~Kaori

OMG I AM SIMPLY STUNNED! this is just amazing. ok...i have to recover, such deep emotion!!! i give this 20 out of ten!! OMG! amazing. just simply amazing~

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm amazed myself with the emotion in the poem. It wasn't based on anyone or anything, just me pondering on the fact that most people with grey eyes are usualy more reserved than others.
Thanks
~Kaori

i have a feeling....it's you....am i right??
I could see ur eyes full of love and affection....

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

It's about me and my old boyfriend, whom I'm still in love with. Only he doesn't realize it. So this is my imagination.
~Kaori

I liked it. btw, my eyes are brown so can't fly in your sky

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, I should write about brown and green eyes shouldn't I?
~Kaori

Oh, I like how you put it in both perspectives! This was beautiful, I'm ;utterly shocked. You did a wonderful job Kaori, simply wonderful! =)
~Maple

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw thanks. I'm glad it shocked you. I'm thinking of making it into a series by doing other eye colours too.
~Kaori

Pretty

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.
~Kaori



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