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Poem By: Olola
Romance


Falling for two people and just not knowing which one to choose..... Childhood infatuations :)
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Submitted: May 14, 2007    Reads: 84    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


I wander past you everyday

Just hoping you'll turn around and say

That you'd like to know me a bit more

And see if you and I could open a new door

 

The skills you have take my breath away

But I'm not so sure if I lke you 'till this day

I've realised that you are the funny such

Although we have never talked that much

 

To me you two are talented

You are both tall and smart

There's something about the both of you

That makes you top my chart

 

But as each school day passes by

I wonder why you never say 'hi'

If one of you could just try and make me smile

And happy after all this while

I'll make you the happiest boy alive

Just because you made an impression in my life.


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Comments:

Very good use of language, sweet intonations and full of heart. You are one of my favourites on this site.

Posted: Feb 4, 2008

Author Comment:

You really do not know how happy I am that you've taken the time to comment on all my writings, and when I have the time I will definiately be doing the same. I'm flattered that i'm one of your favourites, you sure are too :D.

This poem did come from the heart, I don't know if you ever had a crush on two people for completely different reasons and you cannot make up your mind about who to choose (even if you did know, you don't have the courage to go up to them and say). However, what you'd really like is for one of them to make the first move, so you get the chance to show how much affection you could give to the person.

If you know what I mean. Thanks again.

Olola x.

I don't tell all the females they are hot as I cannot always relate to their writings and most do not have a photo up. I am sincere in expressing how attractive I think you are. And about the guy who will not approach you, well maybe he is either shy or intimidated. If I was near you I would approach you, but that's me. xxx You are a beautiful and think no less.

Posted: Feb 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Eric, you seriously do flatter me. I'm really glad that you can relate to my writing, I never knew that I could get across to people like that. I also think that it is a good thing that you would approach someone that you find attractive as I usually think that men should do all the approaching. Olola x.

:-) I like that poem. :)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Inese. Olola.



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