Ready to show their feelings,
Trust to their partner,
Just let them be lover,
Who always stand for each other.

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Love is in the air..
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Submitted: Jun 10, 2008 Reads: 44 Comments: 4 Likes: 4
Ready to show their feelings,
Trust to their partner,
Just let them be lover,
Who always stand for each other.
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hi! orange. so u've proceeded to love! true, trust is the basis of any relationship. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
Mmmmm.... i'm gonna e-mail this to Madame Catz...
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
DEAR ORANGE....i would say just one thing and that is
THIS POEM SHOWS UR HONESTY.....
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
oh, I love how honest and simple this poem is. Sometimes the best things said are those with the fewest words! Lovely. ~Em
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
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