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Finally Found

Poem By: Orange Fay
Romance


Tags: love

My first poem...please send me comment so I can IMPROVE it...Thanx...

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Submitted: Jun 10, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


 

A lonely heart finally found,

 

Ready to show their feelings,

Trust to their partner,

Just let them be lover,

Who always stand for each other.


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Comments:

hi! orange. so u've proceeded to love! true, trust is the basis of any relationship. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm not in love now but this poem remind me of my old boyfriend...n I still can't forget him..(so sad)...
Thanx...n_n

Mmmmm.... i'm gonna e-mail this to Madame Catz...

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh no!!!!! She will laugh at me....heheeheee....love u sis! Gud luck 4 ur PLKN!

DEAR ORANGE....i would say just one thing and that is

THIS POEM SHOWS UR HONESTY.....

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx...;D

oh, I love how honest and simple this poem is. Sometimes the best things said are those with the fewest words! Lovely. ~Em

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank u so much.......................n_n



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