Roses are red,
Your eyes are green,
I knew you were special,
So I called you Faline.
Tulips are white,
I oft' miss you much,
I'm longing my lips,
For your lips to touch.
Violets are blue,
I love you a ton.
This poem is short,
And now it is done.

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A little ditty when I was missing my girlfriend. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 Reads: 91 Comments: 6 Likes: 4
Roses are red,
Your eyes are green,
I knew you were special,
So I called you Faline.
Tulips are white,
I oft' miss you much,
I'm longing my lips,
For your lips to touch.
Violets are blue,
I love you a ton.
This poem is short,
And now it is done.
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Cool, short, sweet, cute, I really liked this one it was very very sweet
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Alice in Wonderland is right. This is really sweet. :) keep up the great work, i'd like to hear more from you in the future. :)
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
Thats so cute. Great job. Your such a romantic.
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
cute and romantic at the very same time. it gives me the warm fuzzies. :)
your girlfriend is one lucky girl. ;)
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
very nice...short sweet and to the point...but it works well good work
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
Nice work...............
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
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