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A vision of my Piece of Work girlfriend. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 Reads: 24 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
She is a piece of art.
The artist makes her, shapes her, forges her,
Draws her, molds her, and paints her.
I'm honored to be able to see the art.
I don't care about any other art.
I want to continue to learn more about THIS art.
I'm honored to be able to be used as a tool,
To help the artist to contribute to and to mold the art.
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i really like it! It is toatally sweet!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
As your other poems, they're very sweet. :) i personally think any girl would melt if they'd be given a poem like that. :) your GF's really lucky. :) good luck to you guys. :)
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
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