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Power of Love

Poem By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


I wrote this poem that describes how powerful love is and that it can make people do crazy things. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 1, 2007    Reads: 126    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


Love’s like the wind blowing,

It causes a lot of drama.

The wind comes and goes,

And so does love.

 

Never underestimate the power of love,

It can make you do things you’ve never done before.

If you’re crazy over a guy,

You’ll do anything to make him yours.

 

If a guy doesn’t love you,

But you love him, just stop loving him.

If you don’t stop loving him,

You’ll end up doing something crazy to gain his love for you.

 

Don’t try to earn a guy’s love,

It won’t be true love, and will never work out.

You’ll just be miserable if you worry about a guy liking you,

So just move on if he doesn’t.

 

Love’s a powerful thing,

If you truly love someone, and they love you, go for it.

Don’t be the one to do crazy things for love, though,

Cause it’ll never turn out right.

 


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Comments:

I really enjoyed your poem. I can relate to what you said. Not with just guys, though, with people in general. Love and trust are things that are earned by being ourselves, not by trying too hard to make them like you.
MAmber

Posted: Dec 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. A lot of people try hard to make other people like them, like popular people, because they wanna fit in. But those people don't like them because of who they are, just their outward appearance, which isn't as important as your inside appearance and who you really are. Thank you for commenting!

you make a good point!

good work!

Posted: Dec 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, in most of my poems, I try to make a point about something, like in this one, don't do crazy things for love.♥

nice work! i think this might be your best poem! i loved it! ttyl! luv ya! ♥

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, this is one of my favorite and best poems. I'm glad you think so, too.♥

Diz poem should go world wide...Every yound adult female and down should read diz poem cause alot of them do crazy thingz.. I almost done something stupid for a boy to notice me, but like you said, never underestimate freindship, cause mine had my back and helped me out. Give this poem a 10 out of 10.

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! Yeah, this poem is something that a lot of girls need to read because they're doing the exact thing that in my poem I said not to do: crazy things just to impress a boy. I mean, why do they do it? Just be yourself!!!♥



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