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Submitted: Jun 23, 2008 Reads: 78 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
Hold my hand
and don't let go.
I want you here
I know you know.
Don't leave me now
but smile at me,
you are my rock,
strong and steady.
Now you have promised
all doubt is gone
and i am sure
you're all I want.
I'm yours, you're mine,
this we both know,
so hold my hand
and don't let go.
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hi! quilla. that's a very very lovely poem. i've read it not once but five times and still not got my fill. love is a many splendoured thing and u've found true love. well done. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Very nice poem, I, too, read it a few times. Ted
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
This is really good. Thanks for commenting on my story by the way, and I separated each part so it made more sense. But anyway, this is really great. I had to read it 3 times so that I could understand the full meaning, which is always a good sign :D
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
thisn is such a sweet poem! the last line makes it sound great!
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
awe this makes me miss my bf sooooooo much hey... brings back memmories, lol funnily he's on this site to...anyway back to my comment.
sigh if only love was eternal, and we could hold the one we love forever.
reminds me of a more innocent time :)
well done
Posted: Nov 22, 2008
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