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"I Will Believe"

Poem By: RaisinGirl
Romance


a hope or dream, optimistic that someday I will find that someone... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 14, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Make me your bride, and I will take your hand in mine,

when I hit my rock-bottom, I still get up again,

You are my distant dream, in the land of love forgotten,

but the memories remain, within a mustard grain.

I will believe in you, for it is I who will remember times,

when days never ended, and nights just whispered,

So create a field for me, to run through when I am down,

and I promise to return, the love that once occured.

I am blissful for no one, yet I adore thee in a future realm,

like the separate walls, that divide time in silence,

So I am waiting for you endlessly, within my empty cradle,

hoping you will come, and finally show your presence.


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Comments:

Beautiful and very well-written. Very tender. I bet many girls could relate to this..looking for their "Prince Charming". Amazing work. ~ Susan

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

well, maybe not a prince, but a warrior, J/K, I have no idea why I just said that(lol,lol)-thank u though for the comment-I guess I want my "knight in shining armour" to come to my rescue from afar-yeah-that's it(lol);D


Awehh! That was really beautiful. xD Fantastic poem.

~!~Megan~!~

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading :D

Aw, *sigh* full of a soft longging. It really is lovely, almost dreamy in it's self. I'm waiting too, who knows when/if they will ever show themselves. :) Loved this one! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks...it's a bit of an optimistic, don't u think?....my trip helped me out some, to think about more positive things

A LOVELY POEM , WRITTEN WITH FEELING . KEEP BELIEVING IN THE POWER OF THE HEART GORGEOUS , LOVE CONQUERS ALL.

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much, and your name says it all "dreaming of you"=I guess that's what we have to do is always dream...:D

Wistful is the only word that can describe this (for me). Good.

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

heehee...unfortunately, what does wistful mean?...I don't want to remain ignorant, so please let me know...thanks ;D



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