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i wrote this after me and my first love broke up :) hope you like it *this was my first ever poem*


Submitted:Apr 22, 2011    Reads: 22    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


"When"

When I look at you i know,

when i turn its true

when i think its always you

when my eyes meet yours

i fall down

so when i tak to you, listen.

i want know one but you.

 Im madly in love and

i cant breath.

As soon as i say.

When.

Let me fall down and lay in a grave.

and when you realise im here

you say.

When.

And then we could press our lips against eachother

But you made your decision

and this is me laying

in my grave

wondering.

When? 





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