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Paradise...

Poem By: Silver Main
Romance


Tags: romance

Romance...Thought I'd try some thing new. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 13, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


How can I find paradise?
 I need not look to far
For in this land there is no place
That can’t be called a paradise
By you and I alone
Still I searched for years and years
Looking for this place
But then I saw my paradise
A young man handsome and kind
That’s why Paradise is hard to find I guess
For people look for a place
Instead of the right thing
I could be in hell
But I’m proud to say
I’ll be content
As long as you’re by my side
For I found my paradise
Hidden in you…


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Comments:

Beautiful, it almost feels like Kanojo-chan is talking to Sasha. It is very powerful.

Posted: Mar 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you I'm glad you like it

Aww this is awesome, and I can relate to that emotion. Aw very well done.
'Hidden in you'

^.^

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it, I had very strong emotions swings when I wrote this one^_^



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