Love (Man in a Dress)

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Poem By: sineadmc1990
Romance

Tags: love, cross dressing, cupid, personification, sineadmc1990

Not what you might expect. This is the personification of love. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jul 30, 2007 Reads: 1776 Comments: 6 Likes: 1

wearing a lace dress
fiery dress and black boots
love walks in the room
all eyes melt on him like ice

he walks in with grace
to send himself to all
for they think its love they want
but only disgrace is on their face

with a voice full of confidence
he speaks to the room
and every ear listens
to his words of love intense

"brothers, sisters, you mock me
but i am the one who you want
i'm the reason behind your marraiges
and the best fucks, not in dreams

and yet you sit there so stupid
looking at me like i'm trash
yet i was worshipped long ago
i was once known as cupid"

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Comments:

Tesseth

lol
That was interestingly bizarre!
VERY VERY Creative!

Posted: Jul 30, 2007

Author Comment:

lol thanks a lot ^_^

it was for a contest (personify anything) so i thought i'd make love a man in a dress ^_^

thanks again.

Dmonik

Gotta tell you Hon, I've worn a dress, and it wasn't fun (not for me anyway, lol) I like this piece. A cross dressing cupid, imaginative and original, then again, cupid is regualrly depicted as a baby, so anything goes I guess, lol. Keep up the good work, and if you see a bear....*Hands Sinead a shotgun*

Posted: Jul 30, 2007

Author Comment:

-takes the gun and backs away- lol
i never wear dresses. you can't do much in them...'cept pull lol

ewww...paedophillia, or what? lol

thanks bro, for the support, comments, and the gun XP

Treshawna

once again sinead you have proved that you are a great writer and creative.

Well done

Posted: Jul 30, 2007

Author Comment:

awwh thanks hon ^_^

coming from you, that means so much ^_^

Terry Collett

Do NOt give up on writing, dear lady, you have talent. Fine fine work.

Posted: Jul 30, 2007

Author Comment:

i'd never give up on writing, sir, for fear that other writers would also stop. i have a pact with a few people, and they are more talented than me.

thanks again, sir, for the kind comments.

boneman

Very interesting poem. A good twist on cupid as it approches valentines day.

Very good and very creative

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks a lot, but i wrote this ages ago; its got nothing to do with valentines.
imo, valentines is just a commercial day for businesses to make money out of romance, but hey, i'm cynical.

thanks ^^