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A far & lonely cry...

Poetry By: Spyguy

Far... Off on a painted sky, my love looks out to a reader far away...

Submitted:May 27, 2015    Reads: 59    Comments: 19    Likes: 11   

Writer inspired... to you, who make me forget about me...

Yes, yes, my far & lonely love; My soul can hear your cry;
My dear, my love is safe for you and never will it die...
I feel your need and write to you a token in the wind;
For though I've come & loved you dear, I fear that I have sinned.
So far away, you call to me, from off on lonely shore;
Inspired now, I write to you, to give a little more.

How am I ever just a man, my world you do endow;

A gift you bring, and in my mind, I jump and revel now.
To touch the heavens of your peaks, the clefts & valleys deep;
Run my fingers through those places I'd make pleasure reap.
Think of me & how I'd joy recieve from pleasure given;
All those tender feelings that from all my love deriven;
Take you to the brink of cliff, a watch-post on horizon;
Look about for love my dear, someone to put your eyes on.
From the mirror of your eyes, the lake of life so placid;

Most important, look inside, your beauty unsurpassed...

Here now are beloved comments from devoted friends:

Lady Jewells; The Lady Liger pads close. Reveling in the raw moments of love divine. Far off in the distance her love stands. She longs to feel his hands in her fur. Rubbing her all the right ways and some wrong. She growls a whine - aching to feel his love. She tosses her head and slowly turns away.. slowly moves away.. Posted: Feb 19, 2014

Author Comment: In my own way I reached out & I tried to touch you today... But, I guess you had slowly turned away... I hope not too far away...

Petersgirl; This was so open and written with genuine feelings. So beautiful and of course you know I loved it! But then again, I love the way you write. Big Hugs PG/JG Posted: Feb 20, 2014

Author Comment: I open my soul & I cry out for you... And all of the very special ones like you... You balance my day, enlighten my nights, spice up the rest & test out my heights...

cgirl001; This is one of your best poems yet. I see you growing as a writer and a rhymer. Posted: Feb 20, 2014

Author Comment: Thanks... I've missed our little conversations... You and your family are in my prayers... Are you doing ok?

Alyson Williams; I love your passion for love. I share that passion for love. This is going to the top of my list of favorite poems you have written. It speaks straight to my heart. A heart that loves to love. Loving hugs, Aly Posted: Feb 20, 2014

Author Comment: You say such kind & loving things to me, & make me feel so good that I can't help but wish the Lord to enlighten you, bless & keep you & watch over all you do & say...

kalelthemith; When love is spoken it is heard and remembered, when love is written it is seen, and forever. Allow the power of your love guide the hands that create the forever. love to love man, peace, out. Posted: Feb 20, 2014

Author Comment: Thank you for the deep philosophy in that statement... I'll do my best... And leave Him the rest...

DeeAnna; You are blessed with the greatest love of all! Posted: Feb 21, 2014

Author Comment: I do believe I have been so very well blessed... Friends like you not the least of those blessings...

DeeAnna; Simply that you are a GIVER of love and because of that you draw all of its purity, like a magnet, back into your orbit and its pulse touches all of us! Posted: Feb 21, 2014

Author Comment: What a sweet, & genuine compliment from one of the best writers anywhere... I thank you so very much from the bottom of my heart for such a kind appraisal of who I am, & what I represent... I stand in awe of those such as you, & my biggest desire is that I can continually improve upon myself in such a way as to encourage more people to want to spend their precious time around me, & those who are around me, to have a stronger desire to get closer to me, in all healthy ways...

writeformeagain; Nice ...felt... Posted: Feb 26, 2014

Author Comment: Hard to tell exactly what you're saying, I know that we've become a world of few words, but here we at least are authors... Maybe you just like to promote mystery... Thanks...

kellyannshirley; This was very compassionate and loving. I do believe that I have changed my mind, this is the one on the top of my list for my favorite of your writing. Always keeping an eye out for a love that can be seen as well as heard, just haven't found it, yet. Posted: Feb 26, 2014

When you look for just anything, nothing can be found, when you know exactly what you want, it may take a little longer to find it, but you don't have to sift through all of the dirt to look for the diamond, you go to where the coal is to be found... Then look for the piece of coal that handled the pressure in the right & best way... When you do that, the Diamond will make itself known...

Please like, if you like, before you leave; Thanks my friends.

I very much appreciate knowing how these make you feel.


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