
Random First Lines: WhispersCan you hear this voice, that is pulling me away?These constant whispers chanting their are no reasons... : Poetry » Read
Just a little something I've needed to let out for some time. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 23, 2008 Reads: 40 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
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so beauiful...amazing. full of love, desire, and passion. This poem sent tingles dowm my spine! ~Twilight
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Posted: May 23, 2008
That was amazing. I could really relate to it. Great job :D
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
It cut me deep in the aspects of the first time you really love someone and everything is just so fresh and new and the simplest things sound so sweet. I love poetry about love.
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
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