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You Went Away; Where

Poem By: TaliaBlu
Romance


Tags: seon, love, losing, lose, lost, in

Just a little something I've needed to let out for some time. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 23, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


I need you
Right here and only here
I cannot eat, I will not sleep
No one has ever treated me this way
I was brand new to the sweet talk
You have me under your spell
When I talk to you
No one can compare
Spontaneous, fun, sexy, love
You give me thrills
I did not know were
I'd heard the Disney stories
And I thought they were so unreal
Had given up hope
And never thought it could be me
I won't have that
I half don't deserve it
There wouldn't be a prince for me
Maybe in my second life
You give me compliments galore
I don't know why
Sure I say I love you
But I don't allow myself to experience much
Keeping to myself
You want me to open myself
I really wish I could and trust me I want
Can you just wait? And it will be
amazing
I promise nothing less
I will give you all you gave and more
I want to, but
Then you went away
I need you here


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Comments:

so beauiful...amazing. full of love, desire, and passion. This poem sent tingles dowm my spine! ~Twilight
p.s.
I invite you to checkout my profile.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it and I will check out your pieces.

--Tally

That was amazing. I could really relate to it. Great job :D

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much; that first sentence just means the world to me coming from a genius. Thank you.

--Tally

It cut me deep in the aspects of the first time you really love someone and everything is just so fresh and new and the simplest things sound so sweet. I love poetry about love.

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, our love cut me too. Especially every time he complimented me and when we broke up.
You pretty much recited the description of our relationship from my perspective. xD

--Tally



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