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Submitted: Nov 17, 2007 Reads: 72 Comments: 8 Likes: 2
You'll never know
The rush I get
When touching your hand
When you make me laugh
When inhaling your scent
How I think about you
My heart's beating faster
I lose my thought
My love for you multiplies
How I want you to take me
Kiss me deeply
Love me in the dark
Having your way; Satisfy me
That all I want
Your sweet kiss
Our hands to hug
Love me back
You'll never know
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Nice ending...
Hope to see more of your work!
Posted: Nov 17, 2007
FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! exactly how I feel for someone in few words
Posted: Nov 17, 2007
few words but very exprsseing. keep up the good work
Posted: Nov 18, 2007
very poignant,
i can say that i relate
so few words but they say so much
hope to see more of your work
tc
Nova
Posted: Nov 18, 2007
I love the line "Our hands to hug". Brilliant work.
Posted: Nov 19, 2007
Deeply beautiful and intoxicating! I love this!!!
Posted: Nov 22, 2007
Beautiful poem, come and look at some of mine, and please comment! I badly need comments from talened writers...:) which is, in a way, telling you that you are an extremely great poet!
Aryanne
Posted: Nov 24, 2007
Beautiful. I can relate to it so well. Great job. =)
Posted: May 8, 2008
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