Loss within

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Poem By: teenwitissues
Romance

I wrote this when me and my boyfriend broke up because i was still in love with him View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 15, 2008 Reads: 40 Comments: 4 Likes: 2

I feel a loss within

A hole within my heart

I feel this pain inside me

Whenever we are apart

I wish we could always be togther

Never apart at all

Forever and always

Our love will rise and never fall

I know that this can't happen

This will never be true

But when we are apart

I always feel blue

My heart will laways miss

My heart and my soul

I will always miss you

My heart and my soul

I hope you miss me too

forever and always

i'll miss you and you'll miss me

for the rest of our days

so read this my love

over and over again

And forever be my friend

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Comments:

floatLinger

i like this
short and sweet and simply expressed
keep writing and getting better there teen

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx 4 commenting. I appreciate it.

Hey teen. I liked it a lot. My relationship of eight months just ended two days ago, this really hit me.

I just joined Booksie too, I hope to see more of your stuff and I hope you read some of mine. You might like the one about the weasel. Anyways, send me a message sometime.

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww...
Thats so sad but im glad u liked it.

an0nym0us

i like this tooo...
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..
i just broke you wif my boyfriend as-well^^
.. sad ay?
how some relationship cant go on 4eva
....i just guess that it wasnt the right 1

...but still hope it would last 4eva

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x

to be loved by some1 is a great feeling
.