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Submitted: Jun 7, 2008 Reads: 60 Comments: 5 Likes: 4
it hurts, missing you
wanting without
a person to half,
dreaming of a person
you can't taste,
thinking of things
you can't do alone.
What are you doing?
out there,
without me.
not scared yet alone
not needing me,
like i so baddly need you.
i'm full of this crap
people call love.
it hurts, without hurting
satisfies without
satisfying
where are you?
not with me.
your in my arms
in my head.
but when i open my eyes
i see nothing
by my half empty bed.
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Oooh. I like this one a lot. It's very sad but it speaks the truth for many of us. This one is definetely getting and "I liked it" vote from me. Keep up the good work. :)
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
Nice ending line.
I love cyclicallity.
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
Very nice... it has alot of thought to it.. alot of people can relate to this
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
Very nice indeed. Along with a great flow, I know many who can relate to this.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
This was great! It certainly is a half empty poem.
This will sound crazy but i have ben thinking recently about naming a poem half empty... i wont anymore, but it really freaked me out when i saw this hahahahhaahah!!!!!
Keep writing!!
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
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