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Falling Out Of Love

Poem By: Tom James
Romance


I wrote this a while ago before splittling with my girlfriend, it's about wanting to be wanted again. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 30, 2008    Reads: 228    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Can’t you see you’re losing me,
Day by day, step by step,
I’m falling but you won't catch me,
Craving attention and love,
You blank me out without a thought,
How I wish we could be how we used to be,
So in love and strong,
The way you used to look at me,
Touch me, see me,
I feel the flame is dying out,
I’m trying so hard to keep it lit,
But you don’t even notice it,
It’s hard to say but I’m giving up,
Maybe you and me aren’t meant to be,
Even now I write this in desperation,
Even though I’d hate for you to see,
I wonder just how long it will be,
Before somebody else catches me?


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Love Without A Name
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"I'm falling, but you won't catch me."

I love this poem..It reminds me so much of myself. =]

Loved it, keep it up!!

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You so much, really boosted my confidence, thanks.

I can totally relate to how you are feeling. I hope you find true happiness.

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, much appreciated.



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