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My love is strong through you

Poetry By: Trustandbelieve

I wrote about a Forever love between a boy and girl and how the boy feels about her and the way the girl feels back. I got my inspiration to write this from my relationship. Me and my girlfriend have been dating for 8 months and plan on going forever. I love her with all my heart and she loves me with hers. This is my first shot at a poem I wrote it for her and I thought it was pretty good. Let me know how you like it,give me some advice, and let me know what I did wrong or what I need to change. Thanks

Submitted:Dec 15, 2012    Reads: 25    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

I will always be here for you don't you ever have any doubts cause I will fight till my lights go out, I will love you with all my heart even when my life gets dark, you can run to me for anything because one day you will be my queen with the shinnyest ring, I can't stand being away to long cause when your with me I feel at home, trust me I will love you forever an ever even if it's the worst kind of weather, I will be with you till the end even if you commit the worst kind of sin cause you have my heart i don't want you to ever give it back one day we will run away together and float to the heavens and never come back, so take a deep breath and think about me and it will make everything better, no worries I'm here to stay till the day the whole world falls to there knees and prays, I couldn't imagine what it would be like without you the wind would probably stop. Or maybe even the earth would drop, but since I have you in my arms now I don't think I will ever have to figure it out.


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