LITTLE SPACE

LITTLE SPACE WITHIN YOUR HEART

Watching from a distance, I monitor your every move,

The radiance on your face shows the happiness you feel

The smile in its place, and the love in your eyes,

As you look into the eyes,

Of the woman in your arms.

I have hoped it was me,

I have dreamt it was me,

But that was never meant to be,

And all that I could do was sing that,

Here I am,

knocking on heavens door,

Calling out to you to take me in,

For I know that I’m no angel,

And I’ll never ever be close,

But I hope that you will understand,

That am not asking for much,

But just a little space within your heart.

Watching from a distance, the pain all seem so strong,

The shadow of darkness, just seems to draw you in,

The pain in your eyes and the tears on your face,

As you look into the grave,

Of the love of your life

I have wished it was me,

I have prayed she be me,

So the light can shine in your eyes again,

But that was never meant to be,

And all that I can do is say that

Here I am,

knocking on heavens door,

Calling out to you to take me in,

For I know that I’m no angel,

And I’ll never ever be close,

But I hope that you will understand,

That am not asking for much,

But just a little space within your heart.

She was the light in your life that should never be dimmed,

She was the love of your life that will never be replaced.

I know

But I have waited for long, and time just seems to go on,

Yet all I want is a chance for you to take me inside your heart.

I swear I’ll ask for nothing more,

Than just a little space within your heart

Comments:

Brian Peza Perrins

Good work Deb!

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again Brian

that made me really think. I enojed it. It reminded me of what i used to think when there was a girl who i really loved check out some of my work...and you'll see what i meen.

Brilliant work Mate.

James Woodrow

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot James...will definitely check out some of your work. Glad you enjoyed this piece.

repairman1946

Brilliant and sad as it tugs at the heart.
Good work Dee

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again Gary

repairman1946

Brilliant and sad as it tugs at the heart.
Good work Dee

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Gary

repairman1946

Brilliant and sad, as it tugs at thr heart. Should be pot to music.
Good work Dee

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

hahaha...you sent like five comments Gary....thanks

irene
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Is a wonderful piece............I liked it.....wish it had musical notes.............could enjoy the rhythm.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks....don't know how to write music notes and all that,could just hum it...sorry. Glad you liked it though.

Brooke Gross

The classic,
want what yo can't have". Really nice, loved it!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Brooke.

runereader

Dee..as you know music on guitar and song writing is
the better part of me..the lyrics above have meaning and depth, and to convey the stringing together of the words with musical rythm and notes would take some brain bashing..I can see it working with a stringed orchestra and a Shirley Bassie approach..FOR FUN IM GONNA SIT DOWN ON THIS AND OVER A FEW WEEKS SEE WHAT JAM WE CAN ADD,Tis a nice composition.

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Gee...thanks Billy. Must admit, am curious to know what you will come up with. Thanks for the comment.
Love, Deb

Pratibha

This is what it should be

PERFECT...FLAWLESS...

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks pal, now I just have to know how to write music, then I'll post the notes too!!

Vincey Delaney

Lovely but truly sad. It certainly made me do some thinking. Thanks for this wonderful piece!!!!

Posted: Mar 2, 2010

Author Comment:

Thanks Vincey. :)

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