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When Love does you wrong!

Poem By: whitehart
Romance


Tags: love, dreams, fears

My dreams and fears! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 6, 2007    Reads: 81    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I have been dreaming of it,

Ever since I was old enough to know these dreams exists.

The flowers, chocolates, walks, smooth phone calls,

Fantasized about them as often as possible,

I still do!

 

I have been thinking of it,

Ever since I was old enough to know that it happens,

The cheating, the beating, the sneaking,

Seen them happening al the time,

In my dream, and in the real world,

I still do!

 

I have dreams,

I have fears,

 

The worst thing about dreams.....

You sometimes wake up from them....

To see that that’s all they were...Dreams!

 

The worst thing about fear,

They control your life,

If you let them.

 

But how can I help myself,

When I have seen how it hurts,

When love does you wrong!


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Comments:

G'day whitehart,
Yeah flowers, chocolates, walks and smooth phone calls are lovely. Sneaking beating and cheating's not so good. No man should ever beat his woman! He should treat her like she's the most precious gem in existence. Luv your work mate.

Posted: Oct 22, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks. Glad to know more people out there the same sentiments I do.

WOW, thats all just WOW, i know of no word that can explain the awesomeness of this..

Posted: Nov 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks Ben, glad you liked it. Take care

Really good yet again! Great interpretation of actual moments! Feel free to check out my page!

Posted: Dec 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks again. I definately will. Take care

i don't know....what to say...u always have a surprise....this is indeed different...

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

^^ Thanks Pratibha.



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