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Random First Lines: depressionas i gaze into your beautiful eyes,i cant help but be swept awayi know i should not listenbut my heart... : Poetry » Read
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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008 Reads: 85 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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hekhekhek... ang ganda simple pero maganda... keep it up... :) ingats...
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
awwww :D yay! a happy one!!
this one is lovely! puts a big smile on my face. i absolutely LOVED this stanza:
Let it heal the wounds you hide
Let it steal your scars
From the past
Let yourself be its door
Let your dream be you
Let your wishes come true
it spoke to me in a way... its hard to explain... ^^
wonderful writing wikhaiin!
wooo thats a lot of W's! hahahaha!
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
Brilliant, really good :) liked the last stanza and this stanza particularly:
Cross over darkness
Fly with the light,
Open your eyes,
And see the brighter side.
Oh, and this one:
Then silently
Let your heart learn to focus
Over the horizon,
Teach it
What you want to know
Take care of it
And both of you’ll glow…
It's a lot more light and flowery than what I usually like, but oddly enough it works really well. Thanks :)
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
Cross over darkness
Fly with the light,
We’ll fly the clouds,
Surf the winds,
We’ll walk the sun
And flap our wings,
Oh no matter how far we’ll be,
We’ll always be together
Friends for eternity
all ur poems have this strong positivity in them and this one is one of ur best....
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
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