Open Spaces

♥

Hold my hand,

Hold me tight;

Catch my breath,

Catch it twice,

Catch me thrice,

Catch me again,

As long as you like…

♥

Let’s take a walk,

A long walk…

Until our feet

Be tardy to stand

Until we feel

The joy in our hearts

♥

Close your eyes

I’ll close mine;

Think deep,

Think more

♥

Cross over darkness

Fly with the light,

Open your eyes,

And see the brighter side.

♥

Listen to your own

Don’t listen to me

Let yourself hear its sound,

The deepest dreams in your soul

Let its echoes be detected

By your radars

♥

Then silently

Let your heart learn to focus

Over the horizon,

Teach it

What you want to know

Take care of it

And both of you’ll glow…

♥

Let it heal the wounds you hide

Let it steal your scars

From the past

Let yourself be its door

Let your dream be you

Let your wishes come true

♥

Please fly safe,

Run calm,

Hug me,

Hug me more,

Hug me again,

Hug me not once,

Hug my eyes.

♥

Now hug yourself.

Never believe in lies,

Hush my dear,

Hug my love,

Sleep well sweetheart,

Tomorrow you’ll be

My angel

♥

We’ll fly the clouds,

Surf the winds,

We’ll walk the sun

And flap our wings,

Oh no matter how far we’ll be,

We’ll always be together

Friends for eternity

♥

Comments:

pitcherglass
(not registered user)

hekhekhek... ang ganda simple pero maganda... keep it up... :) ingats...

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ salamats ui nagreg knba d2? heheh pwede ka kaia mag-member d2 . bket aiaw moh?

Alice Oiseau

awwww :D yay! a happy one!!
this one is lovely! puts a big smile on my face. i absolutely LOVED this stanza:

Let it heal the wounds you hide
Let it steal your scars
From the past
Let yourself be its door
Let your dream be you
Let your wishes come true

it spoke to me in a way... its hard to explain... ^^
wonderful writing wikhaiin!
wooo thats a lot of W's! hahahaha!

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

whew cool i love it! many w's oh yeah! sure cheers me up for my quiz later in school! ^ ^

i want to thank you for your time =)
God bless you =)

AlexBellotti

Brilliant, really good :) liked the last stanza and this stanza particularly:

Cross over darkness
Fly with the light,
Open your eyes,
And see the brighter side.

Oh, and this one:

Then silently
Let your heart learn to focus
Over the horizon,
Teach it
What you want to know
Take care of it
And both of you’ll glow…

It's a lot more light and flowery than what I usually like, but oddly enough it works really well. Thanks :)

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

whew ... good thing somebody still appreciates my poems =)
thank you very much for sharing your opinion and time for reading it =) it sure helps...

Thank you very much and God bless you =)

Pratibha

Cross over darkness
Fly with the light,

We’ll fly the clouds,
Surf the winds,
We’ll walk the sun
And flap our wings,
Oh no matter how far we’ll be,
We’ll always be together
Friends for eternity

all ur poems have this strong positivity in them and this one is one of ur best....

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

ohh... this is positive,.. but quite influenced of dreaming fantasy... coz it seems to be impossible... especially the last line ... woo... i just babble here what i want to tell myself... and what i wish/dream about... but all they were? oh yes, all but dreams...

but anyway... i still want to thank you for your time =)
I'm just too sorry that I don't have this enought time to read the works of others in our community

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