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Until The Death

Poem By: XBrokenHeartedX
Romance


Ok so this poem is dedicated to my, now, bf Mathew. He wrote me a song, so I thought I'd write him a poem:) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 83    Comments: 10    Likes: 5   


Underneath these shades of light,

Inside this air I breathe,

I feel the drug spreading through my body,

Like a poison being let loose.

 

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Beneath the pedals of a flower,

Inside the broken heart,

I feel this poison sealing the wounds,

Careful of every stitch.

 

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This new feeling,

These new words I need to express,

Are unknown to what I’m used to,

And I like the change.

 

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A blossoming flower,

Turns into a rose of desire,

Singing the lullaby of your song,

That I will always keep true to my heart.

 

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A single melody that spreads through my veins,

A single voice in my mind remains,

A harmony worth listening to until my heart beats to a stop,

A memory worth holding onto until my dying day.

 

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A promise so true,

There’s no doubt you’ll keep it,

And I’m no longer so lonely in this world,

As if I’ve finally gotten a cure for my pain.

 

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Everyone always knows the ending,

A miracle occurs and they live happily ever after,

But I want my story to be different,

I want our story to be different.

 

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My savior, your wishes have come true,

And I am finally in your fairytale with you,

Holding hands finally through those struggling battles,

And you are no longer blind from love.

 

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I am here now,

Waiting in front of you as I always have been,

And here I will always be,

Until Death Do Us Part.

 

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I will always be here waiting


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Comments:

Be well. :)
Love is rather complicated.
Good luck my friend ^^

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Punishment:)

This was really good and i hope he likes it. I really like the last lin e when you said i will always be here waiting that was ............ the perfect ending.

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw ha ha thanks Joanna! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope he likes it too.

heeeeyyyy you used my name in it! haha. wow. ur really gonna keep this memory and that song until your dying day? :) you make my heart smile. and welcome welcome welcome to the wonderful fairytale of Mathew. I hope you enjoy your stay:) zoe this was really unexpected. you've really created a good imagery, and you've made me really happy. i'll keep this poem forever:D thanks zoe

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Hhhhhmmmm...do I get a 5 star suite? Ha Ha Mathew, I enjoyed your song so much, that I wanted to make you a poem that I thought you might like. *pft* I made your heart smile before. LOL. Thanks so much Mathew.

cute! lol i loved it :)
very beautifully written zoe ^^ best of wishes to this new love.
ah and now you will experience the romance that you've always felt connected with! its a lovely thing. embrace it :)

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much Alice:) Ha Ha I know! Every summer...and now this one. I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for the comment:D

So sweet....AMEN...
GOD BLESS YOU ZOE...

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Pratibha:D

This is very sweet, although love does not always work out as we often plan for it to...

I wish you two the best!

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope it works too:)

I enjoyed this...I too, write love poems for my special one. :) But I really like this...and also, I have posted chapters 1-3 of Victoria Dawn if you were interested.

Good work, please keep it up!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! Well I wouldn't call it love quite yet ha ha, but thanks again:) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh thanks! I hope to catch up soon here.

Ahhh..love is a poison, is it not? The sweetest poison and the most sought for. Are you hoping that your flower with blossom into the rose that you described?
Your bf is sure as lucky!!
^^
Good work on the poem, i could almost feel it.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

i liked the poem it was deep and i never really liked poems that didnt rhym before because they never really caught my attention well until recently but hey this wasreally good keep me updated when you add some new stuff thankx xx

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! Yeah same, I didn't like poems that didn't rhyme either; in fact I couldn't write them. But I now seem to like them better:) Ha Ha thanks so much again and I will update you when I post some more stuff:D

Awh so cute
Seriously loved the poem
:]
Let me know when you put another poem up because this was seriously extremely beautiful

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I definitely will:) I'm glad that you enjoyed it.



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