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Submitted: Dec 30, 2007 Reads: 85 Comments: 10 Likes: 5
Need
I never loved you in the first place
I never wanted to talk to you
I never needed you when i said i did
I never missed you when i said i did
I didn't love you i was obsessed with you
If we didn't talk, I would have died
I always needed you
I always missed you even if you were standing right next to me
and i still do
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Wow, powerful. What more need be said?
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
I freeking love this!
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
Hmmm i'm soory I did not get it much, how can oh never mind I got it, I got it; ut us a good poem.
Posted: Jan 4, 2008
aw, this was really good, I think it's something a lot of people can relate to. Keep up the good work =]
AshleyJayy
Posted: Jan 6, 2008
Oh that almost made me cry at the last sentence, "I always missed you even if you were standing right next to me, and I still do." This was really a fabulous piece of work.I can really relate to this piece, which is a good sign:) Ha Ha
XxxxxBrokenxxxxX
Posted: Feb 19, 2008
you are a wonderful poet!!!
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
that's amazing!! lemme guess, james?
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
First few lines tricked me a bit...:-)
But there was more to it when I read all the way to the bottom. Liked it. :-)
Posted: May 16, 2008
This is the best! I love your work! I give you a 20! I know it doesn't go that far up but if it did that is what you would get on all your writings! I'd love to work with you sometime! Think about it and you can email me at tisha_mcpeak2001@yahoo.com!
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
This is so sad.Im sorry.
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
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