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A Perfect Combination Chapter 14

Script By: 2011Paramedic

So far in Chapter 13, Wendy and Kathleen both get a shocking unexpected visit from the coniving ex girlfriend of David Young Sarah Colby, and now in this scripted story we go back to Pittsburgh and on to chapter 14 to see the lovely Susan who had just left her working place calling it a night and then head on home to her own place just to be with her fiancee Ryan and everything, so here's chapter 14!

Submitted:Feb 23, 2012    Reads: 21    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

Fade In (Pittsburgh, 8:46 PM

(As Susan left the office building to head on home to be with her fiancee Ryan and to have a late dinner with him as well)

(Susan got into her car and drove off as the engine starts)

(Then Susan stops by at her favorite chinese restaurant called "Mr Lee's" just to pick up some chinese food for dinner for both her and Ryan and including a bottle of wine and iced tea as well)

(Just then, Susan's father Ben Watkins was at the restaurant picking up some chinese food came by to see her daughter in person and as Susan looks at her dad, she truly does not look too happy to see him..)

Ben: "Hi there, sweetheart"

Susan: "Dad, what are you doing here and what do you want with me?"

Ben: "I just came to town just to stop by to see how you were doing that's all"

Susan: "Well i am fine and i have my own life to live, Dad and i can't talk to you right now i have to go home to have dinner with Ryan he is waiting for me there and i have to get to it, ok?!"

Ben: "Suzie come on, don't be like that you're my daughter my very first one."

Susan: "Yes, i am your daughter! a daughter would like to know why did you abandoned me and my mom and my whole family when you and mom decide to call it quits on the marriage where were you when all the terrible things happen huh? where were you?"

(Susan quietly sobs and storms out angrily)

Ben: Susan, wait!"

Susan: "Leave me alone!"

To be continued


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