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A Perfect Combination Chapter 41

Script By: 2011Paramedic

Okay, we are now in Chapter 41 to this amazing scripted story with a continuation that was left off in Chapters 39 and 40 and still in the city of Nashua, N.H. and surronding areas, so here's Chapter 41!!!!

Submitted:Oct 26, 2012    Reads: 70    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   

Fade in: (Nashua, N.H. Michelle's Rooming House, Friday, 5:17 PM..)

(Record of that Susan Walsh's hot song sudenly cuts off with Jolene with a slight angry look on her face)

Jolene: (angrily demanded) "What is this woman doing here with that loser boyfriend?!"

Michelle: "Jolene, please! this woman is Ryan's fiancee' her name is Susan Watkins and the man is also her fiancee' Ryan Longwood and they're here for the weekend untill monday!"

Jolene: "Oh, really?!"

Michelle: "Yes, really!"

Susan: "Hi there, Jolene my name is Susan but you can call me Suzie and i wanna be your best friend too!"

(Susan flirts a bit and then giggles very happily)

(Jolene angrily sighs a bit and then angrily tells Susan)

Jolene: "Go fuck yourself, Susan!"

(Throwing an icee all over Susan's white ribbed sweater)

(Jolene then angrily storms off)

MIchelle: "Jolene, you get back here this instant!"

Jolene: (Yells back) "Fuck off!!!!"

(Eddie and Ryan looked at each other in a surprised horrified shock)

Ryan: "Honey, are you all right?"

Susan: "Yes i'm okay, Ryan i just need to be alone for a few minutes."

Ryan: Yeah, sure but hurry back okay?"

Susan: "I Will."

to be continued


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