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A Perfect Combination Chapter 53

Script By: 2011Paramedic

So Far in Chapter 52 of that scripted story, Austin tells Eddie that Fay is a real beautiful girl and Patty tells Fay that she truly loves Eddie very much as well, and now we are up to Chapter 53 and we will go back to San Deigo California to meet two 20 something year old women named Carla Wilkins and her best friend Margo Moore were at a local nightclub named "Philly's" just to have fun and dance to some great disco and pop music where Margo meets Jeremy Fairgate, a doctor working for San Deigo memorial hospital who she loves to catch her eye on that great guy, so here's Chapter 53!!

Submitted:Jan 13, 2013    Reads: 29    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

Fade In: (San Deigo, California, Friday, 7:27 PM!)

Close up shot: (On San Deigo's newest nightclub "Philly's" on Travis Lane near the candy store!)

Carla: "Well Margo, this is a very fun nightclub!"

Margo: "Yeah, it sure is, let's have some fun and meet cute guys!!"

Carla: "OKay, sure let's do it!"

Margo: "Beautiful!"

(Margo was wearing a lovely sleeveless Orange dress and Carla was just wearing her long sleeved casual clothing)

(Just then a handsome 27 year old doctor named Jeremy Fairgate walks up to the two girls to meet them in person)

Jeremy: "Well hello there, ladies!"

Margo and Carla: (in unison) "Hi!"

Jeremy: "I'm Jeremy!"

Margo: "I'm Margo, she's Carla!"

Jeremy: "Hi!"

Carla: "Hello!"

Margo: "Listen, Jeremy, do you wanna have a drink with me someplace? me and Carla could use one real badly!"

Jeremy: "Sure, let's do that!"

Margo and Carla: (again in unison) "Beautiful!"

(both girls giggling)

to be continued


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